I had great plans for this, but as usual they went nowhere. Sel remonstrations are as present in the original typescript. The Well of poison was the name of the ship that they were going to sail up from the depths.
The
Well of Poison
The
five sailors looked far worse than the captain did, but that was
because their deaths had been more violent. They displayed limbs that
had been chewed up and cracked, and crushed ribs under loose-hanging
strips of flesh. Some had stomachs that had been eaten out, others
trailed gore like pendants of favour, and one even had had his skull
crushed by gigantic jaws so that he saw with only a single eye.
The
captain took them across the seabed, countless leagues of shifting
scenery filled with life. Shoals pulsed and startled when they drew
near, larger fish took an interest in them in great passing sweeps,
but nothing dwelled, for they were protected; a troop of sacred
lepers, untouchable out of fear and respect. At times they even
thought that they could make out a great bulk in the gloom ahead or
to the side of them, but it was always gone as soon as they were
aware of it, leaving only a faint pressure shadow in the vast
currents that surrounded them.
description
of mussel shore (why can’t I fucking do this already?)
The
pain was intense, even to the dead. The salt tore at their bloodless
flesh and bathed them with agony until there was nothing left of them
that wasn’t bone or metal. They continued, though, because they had
to. The ship must sail again, though it was an ill-named craft who’s
previous had been distinguished by notoriety.
Stuff
about the background of the ship?
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